Today is the last door post from Torre Alfina, visited last autumn on the Last Day I Saw Something New. My poem – which is a haibun – explores the symbolism surrounding Tuscany.
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Prompt 22: “Today I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that invokes a specific object as a symbol of a particular time, era, or place.“
I decided to tackle the entire symbolism that surrounds Tuscany, where I live, with the following haibun (basically, a block of prose followed by a haiku).
Tuscany Eyebrow-raising. Envy-inducing. Assumption of riches. No wonder that disappointments come easily. “I thought you lived in a villa.” “This doesn’t seem like typical Tuscany! No cypress trees?” Maybe because Tuscany ends 15 minutes away. Imagine living in Lazio. It would have a completely different ring to it. Mistakes: “Ah, Tuscany! I was travelling around Alicante a lot when I lived in France.” Or, the favourite: “Where are now your famous lavender fields?” We have poppies, remember? Alicante is Spain. Lavender is Provence. Provence is France. They plop “Tuscany” on products to raise the price. Priceless poppies laugh.
In photos first this one, just in. Sister sends this lovely shot from Maribor, Slovenia, saying: “They say it’s Thursday.”
And now, who says that it must always be Tuscany? This is the last post in my Torre Alfina door series which begins with this post. So far we have climbed to the top of the castle with a lovely but closed door and now we return down to the town.
It was October 30th 2020, the Last Day I Saw Something New. I packed my dog and we drove to Lazio to visit this castle town that I hadn’t even heard mentioned before. It happens all the time. The entire Italy is packed with beauty, not only Tuscany.
But the truth is that in such golden light everything would look pretty. Just look at these autumn leaves!
For Thursday Doors challenge hosted by Dan at No Facilities
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This day in my NaPoWriMo history (2018):
When will the pigs fly? “I’m going to write a poem about le porchette che volano,” I announce and he smiles. He smiles a lot these days. I know why. He is disassembling and reassembling room by room. There is stuff everywhere but there is method to the madness. The smell of cleaning agents calms him. The aisle with home care products is his favourite part of a shop. He gave a salmon paint-over to the smallest and most concealed space in our home and left the light on to illuminate it just because it’s so pretty. His zest brushes off and Manja – the uncareful and discareless one (who rushes off to write down these two words announcing that she is bound to do this sort of thing more often now that she’s a poet) first knocked down two mattresses that knocked down an open tub of paint that splashed all over (you get the idea) just trying to help, and today spent her Sunday cleaning the bedroom of her own free will. Her mom knows. One time she called Manja and asked her what she was up to and Manja replied “I’m buying a broom.” Obviously it happened then and now it’s happening again. Le porchette volano. The pigs fly.
I loved that bitter-sweet haibun. There’s nothing as stupid as tourists.
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Thank you, Bojana. 😀 I think I’ve crossed over to the side of nature. There is more nature here than people.
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Which is awesome.
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Wonderful 🙂 🙂
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Thank you, Bushboy! That was a great day.
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I can see why you stopped to snap a photo of the gate, very nice photo
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Thank you, Alice. 🙂 That was the main road too but luckily seemed deserted at that moment.
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I love your spirit, Manja – “I braked while backing up…” of course you did 🙂 My favorite today is the beautiful double door at #40, but they are all nice. You had a very fruitful visit.
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Haha, thank you, Dan. If I’m alone in the car it’s easier. Even though amore might do it too if I asked nicely. It was a great trip.
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The truth in that haiku!
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Thank you, Gloria. Poppies made me write it. 😀
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“Priceless poppies laugh” – great line. 🙂
I love that mailbox.
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Thank you, Lynette! Poppies have abducted me. They told me to write this. 😉
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The wonders of fall seen in spring! Love the red leaves on the wall! The angle of that tri-corner front (am forgetting the name for that Renaissance feature) is perfect! Why the hurry? Or is it the leaves?
Jesh
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Thank you, Jesh! Oh, I wasn’t in a hurry, I spent enough time in this little town. The light was going and it was time to go home.
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Okie dokie, I believe you:)
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As always, a lovely selection of doors. I long to visit Italy again, but your glorious posts will have to keep me going until travelling becomes a little easier.
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Thank you, scooj. From Monday I hope we are back to yellow and I can explore some more.
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Good luck.
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I like how your photos make me feel. The texture of Italy and all its ivy covered walls, deserted pathways, washing lines…wonderful!
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Thank you, Teresa. I’m glad to hear this. Italians are great at life. 🙂
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I can see it in your photo, Manja!
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Love how the haibun form works with this subject matter. The block of text suggests a swarm of tourists with a swarm of misconceptions! A wall of silly questions. Stunning photography, as always.
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I’m so glad that you think this, Alana. Thank you for telling me.
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All those towns and countries,,,so confusing!
But you are right about the golden light. Dazzling! (K)
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Oh, K., I know, it’s easy for me to say since I’m here. The golden light wins everywhere. Thank you!
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Ah, your Tuscany poem reminds me of how I feel when I hear Winter Wonderland…🙄 (Well written, though!)
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Thank you, SMSW. Can it be that we always dream about something other than what we have?
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Certainly sounds right! Also, we dream of places in an unrealistic way 🤩
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Very true.
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Love that one that your sister sent, a stand alone beauty. And that growth.
That reflection in the car door, in including the gas pump says it time to hit the road!! That place sounds. Your haibun is nice topper… buying a broom. Funny, bitter sweet as someone said.
Love it!
Pat
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Thank you kindly, Pat. It’s time to hit the road, definitely. Soon.
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I’m compiling a list, can’t wait🙂
Pat
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Fabulous doors and I love the shot of the lines of trees. I also enjoyed your writing, Manja. We lived in Alicante Province for quite a few years.
“They plop “Tuscany”
on products to raise the price.
Priceless poppies laugh.”
That’s a good one.
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Thank you, Jean! Ahh, wonderful! I haven’t even been to Spain yet and couldn’t find Alicante on the map. I just had a look and seems fascinating! I’m really glad and proud that you like my words too. Happy spring!
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