Day 11: Dear Luka letter

Today we had to write a letter to a famous person or yourself and receive a reply. I hope Luka never googles himself.

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Prompt 11: “Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a two-part poem, in the form of an exchange of letters. The first stanza (or part) should be in the form of a letter that you write either to yourself or to a famous fictional or historical person. The second part should be the letter you receive in response.” 

First, a comic effect: Slovenian comedian Klemen Slakonja has done parodies of Putin, Trump etc, but here is his fan and fun take on Luka Dončić, Slovenian basketball player in Dallas. Klemen is acting all three main characters.

And now the letters.

Dear Luka,

Tell me, how is it
in the land of make believe?
How do you cope?
How do you live?
Are you being made to pay
for what others did in history?
When you get hit, bitten, grabbed,
pinched, scratched, smacked, 
how often a call comes 
and how often none?
How hard is it to keep your mouth shut
and not yell every single time
“Aaaand one”?
And after all the passes you dish out
so generously,
is it hard not being passed to
at an All Stars game
and sometimes even at your own?
But most of all I wish to know
how you, who does all to win like a boss,
handle something called a scheduled loss.
No need to tell me, I can see it clear as day:
on those nights you don’t even play.

Dear Manja,

Thank you for your concern,
I’m just fine. 
The bruises you see
are a sign 
of their lost honour 
not mine,
mine pale in comparison.
But what keeps me going
almost every night
is the memory of how
you and others of my nation
laughed at my father at the time
he played for Polzela,
saying he was too fat,
couldn’t jump,
barely made it across the court,
but he knew how to score
and now his son is settling it,
the score.
But when a loss is scheduled
it means money wins,
and to compete against that 
in the NBA
is a mortal sin.
I’d be tempted though, no doubt,
and that’s why, you know, I’m out.

Here is another poem on basketball I wrote without even a prompt.

You can find many collections of his highlights online, here are just too, out of playing time.


In photos, the places where I played basketball first and last, and some hilarious action shots (which you may have seen already).

For:

NaPoWriMo 2021 Button with black background

This day in my NaPoWriMo history (2020):

Quarantine flowers

Now is still a good time.
Spring is in its mild phase
and flowers are a good sign.

As long as they bloom, it’s fine,
before drought claims green space.
Now is still a good time.

Bees are still buzzing around
but blooms are harder to trace,
and flowers are a good sign.

Do you want to find the right rhyme,
and rank flowers fallen from grace?
Now is still a good time.

Jealousy, beauty sublime?
Symbols are not in a race,
and flowers are a good sign.

Compared to what waits in line,
quarantine is a good place,
now is still a good time
and flowers are a good sign.

14 thoughts on “Day 11: Dear Luka letter

  1. My last apartment was just above a schoolyard with lots of hoops. Even when supposedly quarantined, there were teenagers there playing (maskless) day and night. The gates were locked but they figured out how to slip through. I did worry about their families though, I hope they did not bring the virus home.

    I love that your parents still play! (K)

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    1. Ahh, I see, this can be a problem. I’m watching those guys in the NBA. They wear masks on the bench but not during play. And the referees are maskless too. I think this was the first (and only) time father had contact with the ball since his university days. 😀 But mother used to play much later with her friends from the team as seniors.

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  2. Great hook, those first two lines and awesome photos, as always.😍 I love your Tuscany table and felt sorry for the abandoned cacti for just a second, before I realized they’re still alive and therefore well taken care of.💜

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    1. Hi, Romana! I think you combined two of my posts, or simply posted your comment under a wrong one. The cacti and the table were in the previous post. 😉 But it doesn’t matter where, your words are always appreciated. Thank you kindly. ❤ (Just curious which first two lines you mean… of the America poem or Dear Luka letter?)

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