This post is a token of gratitude to Jeanette Winterson. My poem covers some of the events from my past that made me change my story.
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Prompt 6: “Go to a book you love. Find a short line that strikes you. Make that line the title of your poem. Write a poem inspired by the line. Then, after you’ve finished, change the title completely.“
I was the fence which needed to be replacedHopeful You know how this ends. You leave and he builds another fence and another pond and another stony path made of stones that he stole from the creek. In the pond are remains of the broken vase which the wind knocked down after he’d placed it on the outside table, and you said so since you had a vision of it falling, and you said so. But you weren’t heard. Not then nor when you planned out the day that ended with a tango singer from Argentina whose concert – you knew – would finish with a quick tango lesson. One hour of free dancing, the kind you’d never even tried. You wore the shoes for it all day. You walked in them all over town with him, from one saucy gallery to the next. The strap formed a deep crease in the flesh of your foot. Once the singer was done and the free lesson announced, you threw one hopeful glance in his direction. It was enough. You turned and walked away. Soon forever. He changed the fence and you changed the country, language, dog, and everything else. You tell this story to the new hopeful. He moves his head from side to side and says: “Not in a million years.”
Since I included her name in the poetry deck, which we were to make on Day Three, the choice of the book was not hard. Sexing the Cherry by Jeanette Winterson is my favourite book, and once I’m won over it’s not easy to lose me.
So this is where the line in the original title of my poem comes from. You can read three passages from the book in my old post here. I add three of my photographs too.
I once wrote her an open letter entitled Grazie for changing my story and posted it on my first blog. I tried to get it to her in various ways but haven’t heard from her (as if she had nothing better to do). It’s been a bit pandemic around here, but I’m still grateful.
Here are some photos to illustrate my fandom.
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This day in my NaPoWriMo history (2020):
Merm + Alien “Fancy meeting you again, Merm.” “How do you mean again, when did we meet first?” “Five hundred years from now. They call it Woodstock. We breed. Our children prevail. When time comes, our youngest is a star. They, who know nothing, call him Alien.” “I hope he has my tail. I can’t help but notice that it tops yours in elegance and style.” “For now, Merm, for now. I have an idea. Look at your tail. See, how it splits at the end? We pull and this is how you t .e ..a …r to bear new life. Just make sure he has my face. It’s the last thing they see.”
Michael Pollan–smart man. Oh, that Tom Robbins book–many moons ago.
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Thank you, Lois, I agree. Just the thought of Tom Robbins always makes me grin.
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Love the book poem. Can’t go wrong with Michael Pollan and Tom Robbins 🙂
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Thank you, Su. I agree! Still need to read the psychedelic one by Pollan. And I think he has another one out already.
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I started the psychedelic one, but could t really get into it.
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Moving back story.💜 Your very first line drew me in. I like how the speaker addresses the reader directly–or herself, perhaps. The tone of the caption “If I really like you, I’ll put you in my tree” reminded me of something Mary Oliver said in one of her essays: “If you have ever gone to the woods with me, I must love you very much.” Lucky books!
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Thank you so much, Romana! Beautiful that it reminds you of her! Books are lucky and I am lucky. 🙂 This is my second poem in a row that is written with “you” as the subject. I wonder what this means.
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You’re opening a conversation–wait and see who joins it.🥰
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❤ Lovely answer. Thank you.
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I challenge you to rewrite it in a few lines.
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Hahha, Bojana, you do? But I wanted to tell all this! Well, let’s see: No tango. Again. Bummer.
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That’s what a blogger friend told me once because my first poems were very long. Then I tried and now I’m hooked on shorts. Oh well…
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See now, it turns out that today we are to write a short one… 😉 Your challenge came just in time!
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Great to hear.
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And you took those years and made them your own.
And…books! There is no end to the wonder of books. (K)
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Thank you, K. Books must never end. We owe them so much.
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We do.
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Wonderful ode to hope and love. I only recently discovered Jeanette Winterson thru her book Why Be Happy When you Can Be Normal? – the best memoir I’ve ever read.
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Yesss, Susanne, you get her! ❤ I loved it too but I don't own it in a book. This is high praise, for her and me. Thank you so so much! Sending hugs and bestia wags tail.
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Wow, I love this poem. Really!!!
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Thank you so much, SMSW! ❤ Today we had to write a short one and I've rewritten this one as I've been challenged by a comment. Just posted it.
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I consider Winterson too, but I bumped into Orwell in a bookcase one floor before 🙂 I love what you wrote, and I love what you created after Bojanas challenge to you.
I got feedback from a magazine that I submitted to that they wanted me to make the poem longer. I didn’t 🙂
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Haha, excellent, Angela. And thanks. Only now I realised that the last line in today’s Fib poem was missing a syllable… Naughty! 😉 Fixed.
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Ooh! This one is superb. I love the title containing “needing to be replaced” crossed out and… replaced!
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Thank you so much, Alana. I’m so happy to see that you’re having fun around here. And I have not made this connection. 😀 May have been subconsciously… Well spotted!
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Hoo, that was a wild diversion, ha ha ha. And now I’m back! Your poem struck me so deeply. I felt the ache, even though I couldn’t figure out who the characters are. So when I got to the open letter link, I clicked. And read more about the author you love, and about the man you love, and how you loved yourself so much you decided to give yourself Life. ❤ And then I noticed a link to Bestia's birthday, so I went there next, and finally I am here again. That was fun and filled with love and adventure and pain and new chapters of all kinds. I'm so glad you invited me along. Hugs and kisses. ❤
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I’m so glad that you got diverted and told me all about it. ❤ Thank you so much for reading all this, Crystal. The characters are real and all this really happened. First my ex and then amore said no to tango, hahah. Much love and you're always invited along!
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I would have danced the tango with you!! If only we had been neighbors.
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